Music video draft 1 - Coldplay, clocks

This is my first music video draft, it is unfinished as I had problems with the SD card I used. I had to use a different model in parts to try and fix this, for my final video I am going to make some of the shots shorter as I have realised they are too long in places, I also need to put a more varied range of camera angles in and have realised that in places where I have one longer shot I can change it too lots of shorterer shots from different angles and distances.

I have taken feedback from a variety of people of different ages:
My dad said I need to film more clocks, as this has a close connection with the song name, he also said he liked the spinning shots as they create a sense of confusion but I should add more of these to create a greater sense of confusion.